2008/10/14 | 歌词修改——认识ABC的都来帮忙XD
类别(原创文区) | 评论(6) | 阅读(71) | 发表于 11:29

事情的起因是这样的:

上个周六周末我需要上近40个小时班,几乎是住在了办公室——周六早八点至周日早八点,周日晚六点至周一早八点——所以翻译完白树虐文还有点空闲时间,就去听朋友们唱的歌,然后,砰!被一首听不懂歌词的曲子击中了……

周一早上回来,睡眠已经严重不足的我基本处于嗑药般的迷幻状态,晕呼呼地竟然就这曲子填了一首英文词出来,要知道我从来都只会巴巴地去唱别人的词,自己连中文的都词都没填过的啊!

虽然名字还没定,但是歌的内容很明确,是魔戒相关,she……star ……sun…… death……你们知道我写谁的吧!

歌曲视频:    http://v.youku.com/v_show/id_XOTkzNzMy


Only   to     face   the  darkest        night
Shall one unveil the   mystery   of   light
Unless to taste  the   pain  of     depression
Or though open yourself   but  never   wide

Out   of   the  silence   we  can sing
Learn from  hopeless for how to desire
Just let the hand of death take her body
Then she start  to  dance  for  truly  life

                Gone, with time ,like a star cross the sky
When the sun          rerise  ,      return with new tide

(she's)Gone, with time ,like a star cross the sky
When the sun rerise,  return with new tide

Out   of   the  silence   we  can sing
Learn from  hopeless for how to desire
Just let the hand of death take her body
Then she start  to  dance  for  truly  life

Gone, with time ,like a star cross the sky
When the sun rerise , return with new tide

(she's)Gone, with time ,like a star cross the sky
When the sun rerise , return with new tide

(she's)Gone, with time ,like a star cross the sky
When the sun rerise ,
                    in twilight 
                  she'll shine 
                     ever shine

一个朋友的修改意见:

yourself ->your eyes
hopeless ->despair

0

评论Comments

日志分类
首页[43]
原创文区[20]
翻译练习[13]
日志杂记[10]